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Dear brother,
I am happy to hear that this education is one that is interested in you because I was in the same position when I was young. I am looking forward to helping you. There are many benefits to it and you will learn many helpful things with this kind of education at the Technical School better than in any school. It will help you later for your job and you won't we needed some sort of course. You will work with technical instruments and you will learn about them.
This kind of education can give you practical knowledge that will use you for the rest of your life.
Greetings!
Your big brother
Answer: 5/10 | I really liked your story! I think you should write more about how the sisters find the spellbook and where the evil jester goes when she is banished. You should also give all the characters formal names. You need to have more of a plot. Instead of saying "Then gradully the sisters secretly continue to send messages to each other and end up finding the location of the spellbook." You could say " When (Name) was banished, (Name2) sent her a message. 'I'm ready to find the spellbook', the message read." You need to add more dialogue. You should also check your spelling as I noticed several mistakes. You should add events leading up to the death of the king and queen. You could also give some information about the backstory of how the General's daughters are asked to come to the castle. I liked your story but overall you need
- Dialogue
- Formal names
-Plot, rising action, falling action
- Backstory
-Setting
-Spellcheck
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Waverly battles against her mother's desires for her. She wants to play chess since she appreciates it, and is good at it, but her mother continuously wants her to do better.
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Vending machines, because each is just a word telling you that both were empty. Vending machines is what the whole sentence is based on.
