Moderate. Moderate if the best choice because sophisticated means a high level of intelligence, but moderate is just an average person.
The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
Your cloak is new; even your skin! Idk if that’s right I did this a while ago I don’t remember but there’s my try.
You know what nvm
It’s fine nvm
Nvm then I’ll ask someone else
