Question

10 points

Answer 1

Not breaking a long paragraph because it deals with only one topic

and

Failing to break written thoughts into enough parapgraphs

Answer 2

Answer:

Failing to break written thoughts into enough parapgraphs

Explanation:

A paragraph introduces a new topic or a new aspect of the same topic. A topic sentence at or near the beginning of the paragraph often states the controlling idea. All the other sentences in the paragraph should contribute to this idea.