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Your question asks you to compare your answer with a model answer. You don't show the context these two answers are related to, so you should look for that context in your paper. It is likely that these answers are related to the previous question.
To make the comparison you should note which elements these questions have similar or equal and how they complement each other. The more similar, the more complementary the two answers are. If the two answers do not complement each other, nor do they have any similar elements, it means that they are completely different.
The correct APA format should be is "Hamari, Koivisto, and Sarsa (as cited in Chen, Burton, Mihaela, & D.M. Whittinghill, 2015, p.<span>39)"
In the reference list, you may list </span> Koivisto, Sarsa andHamari. In an APA format, should follow the author-date method, meaning the authors last name came first follow by the date of publication.
I hope that your answet is pathos .
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Explanation:
What we see in this story are two extremes of kinship: Monsieur and Madame Valmondé very willingly take in Desiree as a baby who they knew nothing about. There were theories among the townspeople that she was left by a party of traveling Texans, but that did not seem to make a difference for the Valmondés. They took in Desiree as she was, and it was only when Armand took a fancy to her as a grownup that Monsieur Valmondé cautioned Armand to at least consider the background of Desiree. When Desiree realized what Armand thought about their child and about her racial background, she writes a heartfelt and urgent letter to Madame Valmondé. The Madame sends back a brief reply: "My own Desiree: Come home to Valmondé; back to your mother who loves you. Come with your child." It is more than evident that regardless of all that has happened - and from the tone of Valmondé's letter it seems that she knew something like this was going to happen - Valmondé very enthusiastically tells Desiree to come home. Moreover, she tells her to bring the baby as well.
