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Of course perhaps that is not solid evidence because most people would probably believe that they are not a bad person; however, other people in the book that truly know Steve's personality attest to the fact that Steve is a good kid.  Take Mr. Sawicki for example.  He is Steve's favorite teacher and he says that Steve is "talented, bright, and compassionate."  Those character traits are absolutely true about Steve, and they are shown concretely in the way that he loves and treats his brother, Jerry.  
 
        
             
        
        
        
Answer:
Cross out did before invited
Comma after yesterday
Add "-ed" after visit
Add "-ed" after tour
Add "-ed" after watch
Add a comma after later
Cross out 'are'
Our corrected sentence should look like this;
<em>Hello from London. Our friends invited us here for a week. Yesterday, we visited Big Ben, and we toured Buckingham Palace. This morning, we watched a cricket match. Later, we walked around Piccadilly Circus and enjoyed coffee and sandwiches at a cafe.</em>