The main conflict is that people treat the horses bad,and because of that beauty is scared of people-yet his mom still tells him not to kick or bite.
It’s all right. Good job!
Its honestly very toxic, our society is changing in a bad way.
As a reader, the only thing I can conclude after reading this excerpt is that Mr. Chiu is frequently distracted by concerns for his own health. As this part of the story goes, I didn't see warm feelings between the couple, or the happiness they share due to their honeymoon. The only stressed thing in this excerpt is the main character's state of health and how he feels relieved because the honeymoon comes to an end.
Having qualities like 'creativity' and 'responsibility' is good because it shows that you can come up with new stuff, and are reliable to do things well etc. :3
