Question

1​"Smile. 2Say ​cheese." 3How many times have you heard those​ words? 4Everyone ​groans, but​ then, when the pictures are​ developed, everyone looks for herself or himself first. 5Photos give people a great deal of pleasure. 6Photography is a great hobby because it​ doesn't require expensive​ equipment, it can be done almost​ anywhere, and it provides lasting memories of people and places.
Which statement about revising the thesis statement is​ true?

A.
It does not require​ revision; it states a limited subject and the​ writer's opinion of it.
B.
It requires​ revision; it states the​ writer's opinion but does not limit the subject.
C.
It does not require​ revision; it mentions the essay topic and​ that's all it needs to do.
D.
It requires​ revision; it limits the subject but does not give an opinion.

Answer 1

I think D maybe I know it does limit the subject but u don't need to have an opinion

Answer 2

Answer: The statement about revising the thesis statement that is true is A. It does not require​ revision; it states a limited subject and the​ writer's opinion of it.

Explanation: The passage provided represents only the introduction of a larger piece of writing; however, the thesis statement ("Photography is a great hobby because it​ doesn't require expensive​ equipment, it can be done almost​ anywhere, and it provides lasting memories of people and places") presents in a clear way the subject that the author will be dealing with in the rest of the essay.  Therefore, it states a limited subject: photography. Moreover, the writer also includes his/her opinion, which is made explicit by means of the adjective "great" and the presence of three reasons that have been introduced after the subordinating conjunction "because".