scout is the main character focused on
There are many ethical issues, social media sites like Facebook collect data on thier on users even when the user isn't on thier app or website, people post really stupid things that could get them in trouble with thier school or even the law. There are many privacy concerns with these social media platforms, social media platforms are able to record ur gps coordinates, they can gather data on ur ip address and your phone comtacts.
The second point in the paragraph about children provides more support for the overall topic: noise pollution. because it's offering more evidence that noise pollution is an issue, "furthermore" is your best choice as a transition. "for instance" would suggest that you're giving an example of something, as in a specific case in which a child's education suffered. "however" suggests a shift, usually describing an exception, and the point of the children's education is not an exception--it's further evidence. "consequently" suggests that you'd carry on to tell the reader about an effect of a circumstance.
I need help my self lol XD
