Often, I lie awake at night
At night, I ponder
I lay awake and gaze upon the stars
Counting sheep does not help me fall asleep
The clock ticks, but I lie awake
Until the rays of the morning sun hit my face
I changed this poem by adding more detail to the original lines. Since I did this, you can understand what is going on in the poem better.
Descriptive language. They describe things about that character.
Analyzing the text, it helps the reader identify the authors choices.
In any scripture its usually the first three to five that are most important