My family and I visited USA a while back to visit my cousins , it was really fun
We visited Disney land , which was so cool .we rode on many rides and rollercoasters .we also played fun games .in Disneyland I took photos with many characters like Mickey Mouse and goofey,I also met Disney princesses like jasmine,belle and sleeping beauty
Then we visited a trampoline park ,which is an area with many trampolines all lined together, it was so cool to jump on the trampolines I learnt to do a front flip!
We also went to a concert of a famous American rock and roll band called greenday it’s my new favorite.their songs were great but there was so much crowd in the stadium ,and we became all sweaty .i. Could barely even see them because of so many people ,and everyone was shouting !!
America is a really fun place to visit ,they have many fast food restaurants ,and we especially enjoyed mcdonalds and Wendy’s .i would defianetly recommend visiting
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These are some examples of famous inventions that really improved our quality of life. Hope you find them useful!
1. Light bulbs
This invention allows us to see and work in the dark. Long ago before lights are invented, we cannot do much during night time, even if you light up a candle, it won't last long and they may catch other things on fire. Light bulbs can be used for a long time, and they're a lot safer and there's a lot more we can do in our lives in nighttime nowadays. Even though yes LEDs are taking over, but before LED is invented, light bulbs are certainly important.
2. Steam Trains
This improves the transportation. Before steam trains are invented, people usually travel either by walking or they ride animals such as horses. Steam trains can give us a fast way to go to another location.
3. Radio
Radio gives us a simple and fast way to send messages and spread information to far locations. This is very useful especially back then, where people can spread information during wars or other emergency situations. We can contact others faster.
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