In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
Participle phrase using a present verb phrase
C) quatrain
I'm pretty sure this is right. Hope I helped :)
<span>He introduces a major conflict.
Hope this helps!</span>
