When enjoying the trip and doing activities one enjoys. The key discovery that life is too short and to just have fun
Answer:
Sentence 4 should be revised to incorporate strong supporting evidence.
poor ocean
full of plastic and cans
caused by humans
that the poor fish can't withstand
I well be happy to see the day
where fish are not prey
the ocean clean
and stop being unclean
Usually when you write an essay, the first and last paragraphs adress the counter claim. but in this case i think it is paragraphs 3 and 4.
