Question

Hello,

Answer 1

Explanation:

The article mentioned in the newspaper is about the thief who used to rob the valuable assets from the residents of Denver, who was eventually caught.

I think the post is absolutely perfect. Just a minor correction. In the third paragraph it is mentioned ‘When I went to get the check, I found it ransacking my closets.’ Here, instead of ‘it’ it should have been ‘him’. I found ‘him’ ransacking my closets.

Apart from this, there seems no grammatical errors. It is written in a simple and fluent English, very straightforward and to the point. The details mentioned are apt, and excluding the unnecessary details leaves the chance of making a post boring, thus leading to a well written interesting news for the readers.