One point would be Grammar
In this situation, <span> DeShawn’s current policy will cover his family for an adequate period of time at his current salary.
The most commonly bought polcies usually ranging between 10 years - 20 years coverage. With deshawn salaries (even without factoring potential increases in waages in the future), the currnt policies should be enough for Deshawn family because he well started to receive pension compensation 2 years after the policy is expired.
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Answer: yes it is
Explanation: because im smart
Answer:
The new sentence would be: Most mammals have hair and all mammals have backbones, and they breathe air. All mammals are warm-blooded, and as a rule most mammals have all five senses.
Explanation:
Commas cant fix a run on sentence when it is long, also there is a period because this one long sentece can be divide into two sentences and still have detail.
