For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
The writer/author uses an appeal to emotion by portraying her family as abandoned by policy makers
Answer:
Explanation:
I said it that it was too late
He asked me where I had been
My mother said that I should close my eyes and open my hands
The teacher said that all the students are taking part in the project
The shop assistant asked me what the size of my shoes were
Answer:
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Explanation:
Please be a little more clear :/
Well a digression is a temporary departure from the main subject in speech or writing. So because the person writing the paragraph getting ill last year has nothing to do with this years cookie sale, I think you are correct, sentence 3 is an example of a digression. So D is the answer.
