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1. I suggest ending the "A time l got a great Victory was in Florida" Ending the sentence and starting a new one. Any number below ten should be written out. (Three not 3) Comma after so. And add apostrophe. (So, when we advanced to the championship it wasn't really easy.) Last sentence needs to be redefined. Does not make sense to say "we scored ended"?
2. Add spaces. (Obviously) How do you quietly storm out of a room? The adjectives do not make sense. He started to own? I suggest finding a better word.
3. Again, anything under ten needs to be written out. Confused by what this sentence means, "We had been going to a store to get some clothes in Greenbelt, and on the Beltway." Instead of 1 week and a half say a week and a half. I suggest saying the arm I broke, instead of that arm. Very good otherwise!!
4. I suggest cutting out everything that said you could not think of a triumph. It just confused the reader. The punctuation is also bad. Add more commas and get rid of the run-on sentences.
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Some researches have found that 79% of the male pattern baldness, although recessive, is heritable; and some others researches state that the gene which causes bladness, called AR (Androgen Receptors) can be found on chromosome X so this makes us wonder about so many bald biological males having both X and Y chromosome and really few bald biological females even though they have the two X chromosomes found gulity for causing baldeness.
Explanation:
The third element to be included in this equation that simplifies this discussion is: dihydrotestosterone.
Testosterone is an abundant almost exclusive male hormone responsible for bones and muscles development too, it also concerns the hair growth, the more abundant hair you get in younger ages the more bald you will get being older as abundant hair is a sign of higher testosterone levels the body is producing.
So it all depends in gene heritage probability, but the most probable is that you get the higher sensitivity of hair follicles from your mother´s family traits.
Using formal language both in oral and written form is an advantage for you. You will be noticed by people and they will remember you more because your language stands out from the language use of others.
Using formal language infers that you are a well-educated and well-round person. People will likely believe in what you say because it will give credence to you and your abilities.
However, when you use formal language with people who are not as well verse to its usage, you will face discrimination or ill-will because they will feel insecure and intimidated by you.
