There are a lot of words which start with f: fain, fell, faring.
This is called alliteration.
The second sentence is correct
The comma should come after the word bus.
If you say the sentences out Loud it would be easier to determine which ones make sense.
An email from the human resource manager, to the employees who report to the manager:
Attention Everyone, Date :
This is to inform, that the company will not entertain or tolerate any late arrivals,long lunches and overly casual clothes at the work place.
It spoils the work-culture of the organisation and sets a bad example for new entrants to the company.This kind of behavior will not be tolerated and action will be taken against the perpetrator.
Thanks and Regards
H.R
Company name