Answer:
c
Explanation:
she dances to the music Asagia bought her
Answer:
I think you should switch to Sila's POV. One thing that might be fun to add is how she (maybe, theoretically, if you want to) got shivers/goosebumps when Seth helped her out of the pond. Or how she could feel Seth's eyes on her as she fed the ducks. Or how she could sense that he was withholding information about her (the family stuff), she could tell that he was biting his tounge about something. Or a comment on the nickname "prettyboy". I would love to see the car scene, and maybe a sweatshirt could be given to dry <em>someone</em> off. You could describe Seth's car and how it's (pick a quality) reflects or is the opposite of how Seth acts. Another thing about love stories is the smell of someone you like is a smell you like..
Explanation:
i'm honestly very interested in this story and I hope you keep writing it!! :)
Answer:
to show you another way to write the word
It's basically to show a writer when it's a good spot to break down a word when it can't fit into a line.
The lower part of the human body
Answer:
metaphor
Explanation:
it explains erika as the heart and soul not "like" the heart and soul.
hope this helps :)
