can i see the story please? i cant really help unless you show that, i can comment on this when you do with my answer :)
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life is not long yet very fragile and can be overcome by you or overwhelming
It is correct but you could use words that people would more understand.
If you were referring to groceries or things you buy from the store, you could say:
He left all his items on the bus.
He left all his groceries on the bus.
(<em>Your answer is great this is just a suggestion) </em>
