Answer:
First you need to choose an awkward sentence from your draft to fix and then explain why the sentence is awkard.
- An awkward sentence is a sentence that you cannot make sense of and might not be able to change or fix.
To help you, here is an example:
A critical perspective is supported by the narrative account in the author's summary.
Explanation:
This example is an awkward sentence because when you read it, you are left with questions. These questions show that the sentence has lost meaning or context due a lack of something like information.
Questions that indicate why this is an awkward sentence are as follows:
-What critical perspective is spoken about?
-What narrative account is spoken about?
-Who is the author?
-What summary has the author written?
The sentence is awkward because of a lack of information which is important to understand the context of the sentence.
