Your running really fast!
That is the wrong “you’re”
The “you’re” that you have to use is
You’re - you are
Hope this helps!
It is an external conflict.
Conflicts are the situations that advance the plot of a story. Fundamental to entertain the reader, because through them the characters express themselves. The external conflict is one that occurs between two or more characters or a character and their environment.
In the fragment, the conflict is between the main character and his environment, which is very cold and uncomfortable. The character should learn how to make the fire to face the adverse situation.
Paragraph 4 because it shows that the mystery has been going on for thousands of years, and we still don’t have much data about the giant squid.