You should use more formal language, for example kids - children, and use more persuasive language and demanding words, other than that, brilliant!
Btw before I answer this, this is not an English question.
I am going to use PEMDAS:
Parenthesis first 1+2=3 so 24-4*3+9-7
No exponents
Multplication and division 4*3=12 so 24-12+9-7
Addition and subtraction 24-12=10, 10+19=19, 19-7=12
I hope this helps.
Answer:
The third one
Explanation:
The third one Mr. Caldwell is asking what is ____ (depends)
In the others he should have continued with a question and when asking something or you are confused you always add a question mark
EX:
What is happening,
What is happening?
Answer to ex:
2nd one :)
No you shouldn’t because what if the students cheat and you give them money they are just getting the money without doing the work and the students who there best don’t get any money that’s not right it’s up to the parents what they do if the students get good grades no then school. That’s the middle of the essay
11. Subtopic (Im a little unsure on this one)
12. Main Idea
13. Supporting detail