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I learned that today is January 26th 2021. I learned today is Tuesday. I also learned that today is a weekday.
 
        
             
        
        
        
i believe it's kitty, she was Milady's linen maid 
i hope this helps :)
 
        
             
        
        
        
You begin with the largest to the smallest. First revise the overall structure. make sure you have introductory paragraph, followed by supporting paragraphs. then summary and closing paragraphs.
After the paragraphs are correct then you can go in and revise sentences that do not belong. either reword or remove. 
The final step is the words. making sure they are spelled and used correctly
 
        
                    
             
        
        
        
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Those are both very good maybe you can try something like this: 
At that moment it seemed everyone stood watching the line where heaven touched the earth. Their wide eyes witnessed the resounding glowing collision. Sparks lit the sky and blood poured, as the glory of paradise descended further behind the seam of the world. People looked back to the line, only a few bright streaks remained to signal heaven’s passing. The sun had set.
 
        
             
        
        
        
Increased consumption of beef, which increases methane production