Question

Who is the point of view character in passage #1 ? Who is the point of view character in passage #2? Which passage is more suspenseful? Why ?

Answer 1

Evan is the point of view character in passage #1. 
Paul is the point of view character in passage #2.
I think that passage #2 is suspenseful because it talks about how Paul waited behind the door, thinking that he heard someone's feet on the stairs. Also, another thing I think it was passage #2 cause Paul had a job that was quick in and out and take the cash and go. And the last thing was that had Paul already setup and there was a distinct possibility that Paul will not go to jail unless he rathers  to kill someone and then go to jail.