Read the conclusion from a personal narrative. Even though we were lost in the desert for several hours, we made it home safely,
because we had packed extra food and water. Our families were very relieved to see us alive and well. Which sentence, if added, would make the best revision of the conclusion? "Where is the main trail?" I asked while searching the map. After surviving those miserable hours in the desert, I learned the value of being prepared. My friends invited me to go for a hike, and although it was a hot summer day, I agreed to go, because I had nothing else to do. "Be sure to drink some water," Tara reminded us.
The correct answer is After surviving those miserable hours in the desert, I learned the value of being prepared.
Explanation:
In general, the conclusion should summarize the information of the text and add any ending ideas. In the case of personal narratives, it is common the author adds a final reflection about the experience described; especially the positive or negative impact this had. In this context, the sentence that should be added to make this conclusion better is "After surviving those miserable hours in the desert, I learned the value of being prepared" because this is the only option that refers back to the experienced described and states a positive aspect or lesson this experienced lead to.
The last paragraph is different from the rest of the paragraphs in that after the description of how the slaves were sold, Equiano asks a series of highly emotional questions (addressed mainly to God) as to why they should suffer such an inhuman fate, and why should they separated from their land and families.
The last one, "O Jane, the purple flowers look better than the pink flowers in the center of the table, right?"
Also, here's a tip when it comes to things like this, try speaking the sentance aloud. However, pause for a brief moment whenever there's a comma. This will help determine whether the comma would fit in the sentence or not.