The correct answer is the third one.
Hope this helps
Answer:
Personally I think the 3rd one would be the best revised
Explanation: While the others are well put this one puts everything into correct context and where it makes the most sense.
Again not 100% sure been awhile since I took English, but it sounds right to me.
Answer:
A sentence that gets right to the point
Explanation:
It's doesn't use figurative language, it's not a quote from a speech, and most people know about Pearl Harbor.
