The sentence has been rewritten in correct parallelism below:
- Children need to be loved, nurtured, provided for, and disciplined.
Parallelism is a style of writing in which words follow a particular pattern that lends rhythm and balance to the text. The way in which certain parts of the text are constructed is similar.
In the above sentence, the addition of the phrase, 'should be,' altered the correct pattern that the sentence had at the outset.
To balance the pattern and rhythm of the sentence, the past participles of the verbs should be maintained. Thus, the revised sentence is the above in bullet point.
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You have to be way more specific for anyone to answer your question
I would say that the most logical sequence for Sarah's essay is <span>the history of Tibet and Nepal; famous mountain climbers who have scaled Mount Everest; facts about Mount Everest; the effects of climbing culture on Tibet and Nepal. hope this helps</span>
