We can see that the sentence that would work better in a story is:
When Logan's little brother wandered into the swamp, Logan went after him.
<h3>What is phrase?</h3>
Phrase actually refers to a group of words that act as a grammatical unit. They are seen within sentences. Phrases also form component of a clause.
We can see here that if a phrase is replaced in "When Logan's little brother wandered into the swamp, Logan went after him." with a something more original and precise, it will work better in a story.
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The verb "looks" would be in this case a linking verb, since it is helping the reader understand the point of view of the observer. The weather itself is of course not "looking" anywhere.