It was in middle school between this girl and this other kid, it was down by this creek that was behind the school and the boy stole her jacket, and the girl attacked him, and kicked him, and they were going at it for a good while. A bunch of kids got some videos of it, and i think the girl almost chocked the other kid out XD
anyways, have a great day! <3
I have not read the passage myself, but here are some helpful tips that can help you to figure it out. An ellipses is a series of three periods (...). Imagery is description that involves the senses, typically sight. Whatever the story makes you visualize is its imagery. Metaphors are figures of speech that contain comparisons, but do not use "like" or "as." Examples of metaphors include "the blanket of snow" or "the curtain of night." A setting is when or where the story takes place. Hope this helps.
A writer focuses on many things.
Some of them include:
Spelling
Capitalization
Punctuation marks
Topic
Number of paragraphs
And, the hook to grab the readers attention in the intro paragraph
