You should use more formal language, for example kids - children, and use more persuasive language and demanding words, other than that, brilliant!
"He had come like a thief in the night." is taken from the Bible, specifically Thessalonians 5:2. It refers to the second return of the Lord (Jesus), that means another one from the one we know. The first one is his rebirth after beeg crucified. He will return as "a thief in the night" because we don't know when it will happen, he won't announce it.
A general disillusionment with war.
The answer is:
It is a common symbol of death that requires little description.
In the poem "Because I could not stop for Death
," the author Emily Dickinson does not provide a detailed characterization of the setting sun. The reason is, even though the speaker is not ready to meet Death yet, the writer wishes to portray the end of life as a natural, inevitable event, which leads to eternity.
True, you want them to understand you as easily as possible and they will not know slang, etc. if they speak little english
