1. Language was used to set the atmosphere as peaceful, a normal camping trip, like every other camping trip. 2. When the narrator said he slept through everything you had to have known something was up, and when he/she said I bolted upright you immediately know that. Something bad is happening. Hope I helped.
C. particular and attentive to details and good behavior
That was easy; it describes me! :-)
The first one is the correct way to use it, since it separates the parts of the sentence into fragments that can still be understood without changing the meaning of the entire sentence.