Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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Answer:
She is trying to trick him into seeing her as a person instead of a meal.
Explanation:
she is trying to distract the monster until her brothers could return.
I think it's C. both simile and metaphor
Answer:
Around the Mediterranean Sea this vegetation is called macchie, maquis, or garigue; it is known as chaparral in southwestern North America, as Cape flora in southern Africa, and as mallee in southwestern Australia. See also chaparral; maquis; mallee.
What about him are you writing? Like facts?