Answer:
no but I'mma need it soon tho
Explanation:
i just haven't told anyone I need it yet
Answer:
The heart tells a tale to the narrator, the fear in the heart leads to the man doing what he did. The homicide.
Explanation:
The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
Modern. Contemporary means living or occurring at the same time.
