Answer:
Things i realized about life
I realized that life is different than anything
life is the way we live and act. Life made me
realize that its not as bad as i thought it was
even though life is hard i realized that its important
to realize that its not as bad any more I also
learned that life is a miraculous thing
Answer:
1. Our teacher said we must bring socks, shoes, t-shirts, and shorts.
2. I wanted to take biscuits, sweets, fruits, and chips for the
journey.
Explanation:
Comma (,) is used to separate the items in a list. In the above sentences several items are listed. These items ought to be separated to be more understandable to the reader. In the first sentence, items such as socks, shoes, t-shirts, and shorts are listed. To be more understandable to the reader a comma is inserted after each item is mentioned.
Full stops or Periods are used to signify the end of a sentence. They were also missing in the above sentences.
<span>Brendan claims he </span>does<span> not have any money, but Riley saw him buying new expensive clothes last week. Write one closed conversation ..</span>
Coherence in writing is the logical bridge between words, sentences, and paragraphs. Coherent writing uses devices to connect ideas within each sentence and paragraph.
So the best answer would be: the order of ideas enabling the reader to move easily from point to point
Remark
Let's begin with the theme. What is the theme of this passage, exactly? Four people -- five if you include Dr. Heidegger -- are sitting around a circle bemoaning the fact that they have lost something not granted to anyone. They have lost their second youth. They have swallowed some water which gave them their youth only for a fleeting moment (it seems to them), and they mourn the passage of time that grants them no more youth that they had been living in for some short period.
The four felt that way. Only Dr. Heidegger seemed to have learned something that told him that he should be careful what he wished for: he might actually get it.
We have two themes then. We have 4 who wished for their youth back and we have one who didn't want any part of it. I think we have to cover both.
The best detail for those wanting it is the old woman who apparently got her youth back and she was incredibly beautiful. Now her hands are skinny and likely wrinkled. She puts those hands to her face and wishes herself to be dead because she despises the fact that she is old (and likely all her friends are dead and she is condemned to a life of weariness. I speculate, but is certainly unhappy about the aging process). She mourns that it is over so quickly. They all do. That's sentence 3.
Only Dr. Heidegger seems to understand that they got something they should never have received in the first place. The yellow sentence beginning with "Well I bemoan it not, ... " reflects his point view as well as anything. That's sentence 5.
