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I WILL CHOOSE YOU AS BRAINLIEST PLZZZ HELP MEEE, DUEE TODAYYYYY!!! Structure this paragaraph in an academic proper way "The language used in Animal Farm, as well as its form and structure, are vital to Orwell’s storytelling. His use of persuasive language, circular narrative and allegory are particularly significant. The language Orwell uses in Animal Farm is simple, clear and accessible. Description and dialogue are kept to a minimum and Orwell avoid sentimentality - even the most heartbreaking sections of the text are very direct in style. He focuses on telling the story, allowing the reader to concentrate on the lessons he wants us to learn. Through the pigs, Orwell shows how rhetoric can be a powerful tool of manipulation. The quote "Now, comrades, what is the nature of this life of ours?" is used to make the other animals question their positions on the farm which creates an effect which shows this rhetorical device is used to encourage the animals to rebel. Old Major asks the question and then he provides the animals with the answer he wants, persuading them that he is right, this comes under persuasive language. The quote "Are you certain that this is not something that you have dreamed, comrades? Have you any record of such a resolution?" shows Squealer controls the others by questioning their memories which creates an effect of this rhetorical device is used to make the animals doubt themselves. Orwell shows how rhetoric can be used negatively, controlling language. Repetition, the quote "Long live the windmill! Long live Animal Farm!" means Here Napoleon uses repetition to reinforce his message which creates an effect of Repeating ‘Long live’ helps emphasise Napoleon’s point that he wants Animal Farm to continue forever. Whilst this appears to be positive, here Napoleon uses the sentiment to make a scapegoat (an individual irrationally blamed) of Snowball. Emotive language, A cry of horror burst from all the animals which shows the scene when Boxer is taken away is very emotive, which creates an effect the fact that the ‘horror’, in itself an emotive word, ‘burst’ from the animals gives a clear indication that their fear was so great it almost exploded from within them. Direct style, Boxer was never seen again which shows Orwell uses very plain language to describe Boxer’s disappearance, which creates an effect of in contrast to the emotive language seen above, Orwell uses direct and understated language. This helps to make Boxer’s treatment more tragic."

Answer 1

Hello! I have one suggestion that would help your essay stand out and make a greater impact. Your claim is very spot on and shows what you want to address. There are some restructuring points that can take place to better the grammar of the essay and make it sound more pulled together, especially where you state "Repetition, the quote..." can be restated as "Orwell utilizes repetition throughout the novella to further impact the overall persuasiveness of the language that he uses to convey his stances. He uses the quote "long live the windmill! Long live Animal Farm!" in order to emphasize a call-to-action and encourage for the speeches that the leaders use to give the other animals an incentive to protect Animal Farm."

If you use this same structure, it ties everything back to your claim and fully emphasizes what you want to state clearly. Just fix the spots where you state the rhetorical device and add more detail in order to fully tie everything back!

Good luck! If this is for AP Language, you're in for a great experience!