Sensory details are used in writing to make the writing seem more real to the reader as they will appeal to the real-world five senses that humans posses.
Using the sensory details in the answer above, the model can be transformed into;
<em>As I was walking outside, I found a bird's </em><em>small yet sturdy looking</em><em> nest in our </em><em>fully bloomed cherry blossom</em><em> tree. It had </em><em>brightly coloured</em><em> baby birds in it. I could hear them. The mother bird came back and fed the babies.</em>
