Question

Which words should you change in this sentence to create an unhappy tone? The glorious sky foreshadows a bright day in this team's record, as soft, white clouds float past the sun, bringing shade to the people below.

Answer 1

To create an unhappy tone, I would get rid of the words "glorious, bright, and soft." These words usually have a positive connotation which adds to a happier tone, rather than an unhappy one.