(1) I have always enjoyed nature and spending time outdoors. (2) Last fall, I was taking one of my regular nature hikes when I r
ealized how much my friends and family would enjoy the beautiful scenery that surrounded me. (3) I wanted to share the beauty of the outdoors with others. (4) When I spoke to my parents, they suggested that I take a photography class so that I could take pictures to share with friends and family. (5) I thought my parents' idea was wonderful, so I enrolled in an evening photography class. (6) In the class, I learned how to focus my camera. (7) I also learned how to choose what to photograph. (8) After each class, I took my camera and went for a walk. (9) While I walked, I photographed trees, flowers, birds, and more. (10) When I compared the photos, I noticed that they improved each week. (11) After my final class, I took pictures of a stream, a cardinal, and a snow-covered tree. (12) With the help of my photography teacher, I printed the pictures and put them in frames. (13) I hung the photographs in my bedroom. Which of these BEST concludes the story?
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused.
