Proofreading problem on punctuation's- It shall be unlawful to install wires or appliances for electric light, heat or power, op
erating at a potential in excess of seven hundred fifty volts, in or on any part of a building, with the exception of a central station, sub-station, transformer, or switching vault, or motor room; provided, however, that the Commissioner may authorize the use of radio transmitting apparatus under special conditions. Are these correct?
Reflexive writing is written for publication, while extensive writing is written for the classroom. Reflexive writing is not meant to be shared, while extensive writing is. Reflexive writing is used by accomplished writers, while extensive writing is used by beginning writers.
