I found this funnier then it should have been
If you expect people to answer your question we would need a link or a passage to read, please and thank you.
You're still talking about freitag's triangle there. So, in a sense, you have a traditional story structure. But sure, that will definitely work and would make readers keep on going. When you say small build up them mini climax then another build up, you're describing traditional story structure. Your just calling your overcoming of obstacles "climaxes" or "mini climaxes" which is what they are in reality.
Answer:
She doesn’t see the fire coming. She is probably frightened.
Explanation:
There is also irony, because she was called the girl on fire, and now she is actually on fire.
