Answer/Explanation: Because of his mother's response to a lifetime of hard work, Jose feels “destined” to labor as well.
Answer:
The best revision is: "I am interested in drawing, painting, and making sculptures". You have to edit "make" into "making" as all the other actions in the sentence are verbs.
Explanation:
2. Word choice and sentence structure help create interesting stories, word choice helps because you can use any words that are similar to the word for example: you can use then but you can also use therefore. Having a large vocabulary means being able to have a vast variety of word choices to pick from.