Answer:
1. You need to separate these two sentences - <em>Mr. Chakota started</em>... and <em>They were joined</em>... - these are two sentences so there needs to be a period between them.
<em>... and former oDesk colleague Josh Brianlinger. They were joined by...</em>
2. <em>"They're going to get their books from there.</em>" - the words <em>they're</em>, <em>their</em>, and <em>there</em> sound the same but mean different things. <em>They're </em>is short for <em>they are, their </em>means that something belongs to <em>them, </em>and <em>there </em>shows us where something is.
3. <em>Your files are graded on accuracy and formatting AND you're going to need to follow Rev style guidelines.</em> - these are two sentences so you either should add the conjunction AND or separate these two sentences completely by using a period between them.
4. <em>It's important that quality is consistent. </em>- here, you need to use <em>it's </em>(short for <em>it is</em>) instead of <em>its </em>(meaning, belonging to <em>it</em>).
5. <em>Use foreign language tags for foreign language speech... </em>- this sentence doesn't make much sense so you might want to rephrase it completely
6. <em>Please, no iPads, iPhones, </em><em>or </em><em>Android tablets. </em>- here, you need to use <em>or </em>instead of <em>nor</em> because English doesn't support double negatives.
I have begun however, do these things pack they’re lunch’s, do your laundry and clean the house. (I think I’ve done it right but not 100% sure)
<u>Answer:</u>
The airline industry has a high demand for pilots; however, the ability to train new ones and recruiting them is very challenging. The experience required determines the capability of wringing. This is because the industry is susceptible and requires more training. Besides training itself is very expensive and may take long time for one to be fully considered a pilot. The process, therefore, may slow down the recruitment process thus making it a challenge to the airline and the entire workers.
Your answer would be compare and contrast because you would want to compare and contrast the remedies to see which one is best.
Hope this helps:)
