The answer is D
Because a run on sentence has no pause or period you have to add one in order to separate the sentences
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The organizational structure of the story "Achieving your Goals" is in order of importance. The structure of the story was important to developing the author's point of view because it tells the reader in which order she though was least important to most important. You can tell that the organizational structure was order of importance because the author used transition words like "first of all, second of all, and m<span>ost importantly." The theme of this story is to not let anyone tell you that you can't pursue your dreams or reach your goals. For example, when the author said "...it seemed like everyone was telling me what I couldn't do" or when she said "...you should never give up just because someone says you can't accomplish your goal" she meant that if it is your dream, go for it and don't let anyone hold you back.
I haven't submitted the test yet so I don't know what I got yet, but I think this answer is right! Hope this helps!</span>
The second one that starts with higher. the simile is ‘like a cloud of fire’
The answer was actually D.
D.) It creates tension by moving from the slower pace of the description to the faster pace of Bob's dialogue, which suggests an uneasiness on Bob's part.
“One of the things that it stands for is this vexing notion that a great nation can consist entirely of refugees from other nations, that people of different, even warring religions and cultures can live, if not side by side, then on either side of the country’s Chester Avenues.”
