2 the volcano erupted in the early afternoon of August 24,A.D.79, and the residents of Pompeii,four miles away,were able to see and hear the explosion,which sent a huge black cloud into the sky
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
C because there was many things she loved by she admired speaking her kind and saying her thoughts to help others
