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Ganezh [65]
3 years ago
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I have to write an essay about what animal I prefer out of cats and dogs. This is what I wrote, I need someone to look through t

his and make improvements where needed. Thank you!
The everlasting question, cats or dogs. Some favor one over the other; like them both or don’t like either of them. I personally prefer cats for many reasons. They have a lot of personality, they are more independent and their owner’s health benefits from them.

In my opinion, cats have more personality than dogs because they don’t follow your every command. If they want to knock a cup over they’ll do it regardless of you telling them not to. If they don’t want to do something you can’t force them to do it.

Secondly, cats are more independent than dogs because you don’t have to take them for walks to keep them healthy. Cats can also use the bathroom by themselves rather than having to be let out like dogs do.

Lastly, humans health benefit from having a cat. They reduce stress, help immune system, lower risk of heart disease and many more.

For these reasons cats are the superior animal of the two.
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xxTIMURxx [149]3 years ago
7 0

The everlasting question, cats or dogs. Some favor one over the other; like them both or don’t like either of them. I personally prefer cats for many reasons. They have a lot of personalities, they are more independent and their owner’s health benefits from them.

In my opinion, cats have more personality than dogs because they don’t follow your every command. If they want to knock a cup over they’ll do it regardless of you telling them not to. If they don’t want to do something you can’t force them to do it.

Secondly, cats are more independent than dogs because you don’t have to take them for walks to keep them healthy. Cats can also use the bathroom by themselves rather than having to be let out as dogs do.

Lastly, humans health benefit from having a cat. They reduce stress, help the immune system, lower risk of heart disease and many more.

For these reasons, cats are the superior animal of the two.






Good luck!!
Furkat [3]3 years ago
5 0

Answer: It's really good! But maybe replace the word "they" woth other words cause you use it frequently

Explanation:

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