I think that was a good passage but maybe you should add some other struggles about being away from your family.
... Can we get the descriptions?
The Second Barons' War (1264–1267) was a civil war in England between the forces of a number of barons led by Simon de Montfort against the royalist forces of King Henry III, led initially by the king himself and later by his son, the future King Edward I. The barons sought to force the king to rule with a council of barons rather than through his favourites.
1) The law of self interest - when people work for themselves and their own good
2) The law of competition - people make better products because of competition
3) The law of supply and demand - enough goods would be produced or supplied at the lowest price to meet the demand in a market