An allusion is a reference; an eponym is usually a noun that's named after a person (i.e. achilles' heel, called that after the greek hero); a hyperbole is an extreme exaggeration; and an anastrophe is your only choice left. an anastrope is the inversion of word order. think yoda.
Could I have more information please or is that the full question
Dear myandmother123,
a lot has happened since the last time that I saw you and it's quite a long story so I hope you have found somewhere comfy to sit. :)
So as you know I moved to a little town called Kearny and I started going to school, but I kind of forgot to write you since my life was so hectic that first year there... 8th grade was wonderful and boring and horrible! I blacked-out and hurt someone when they used the wrong name too many times, full-on screamed at a teacher until my foster sister pulled me away to our next class, fought with my arts teacher way too many times, I won a bunch of awards for my art and my grades, I learned that I could sing well enough to get into an honor choir, I rekindled my love of reading, almost made a friend, and testified in court for the first time(which was really scary).
Then I get to high school... I went to like all the dances! I dated a couple of very kind and caring guys, but in the end, broke their hearts with my brokenness. :( I got into two more honor choirs, as well as theater(but I didn't get to perform because clumsy me got stitches). I made some amazing friends, lost my foster sister that had helped me in 8th grade, and won my court case! but then I moved away... so now I'm nowhere near anything I've ever known, but I've had a bit of time to adapt to the weather here, and I plan to write you more often. :)
Well, that's all for now.
Bye!
~your old friend Xzeina <3
The second and last sentences use the most florid language and are thus more interesting to a reader.
Hope this helps.
It requires you to point things out that are wrong even if it might offend the person who is speaking, writing etc.
