What the question? I’m having trouble figuring out what’s the question. Please reply back !
Answer:
He spoke like a professor
Answer:
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Explanatin:
uhhh i put the words together and can you make me brainliest im new to brainly
Omit “In the beginning”, simply write “It all began with...”
- There is a repetition of the idea of beginning
Change the sentence structure: Engineer Ralph Baer began to investigate how to play games on TV while working for Sanders Associates Inc.
- Passive to active voice
Omit “And” and the repetition of the investigations: As a result, Brown Box was created.
- Syntax as well as sentence structure
Add a comma after “Little did we know”: Little did we know, this great invention would be in everyone’s life today.
- Syntax
I’m also a student and I doubt I’ve learnt these so I can’t be sure if these are correct, but I hope these were at least useful.