Feedback:
I think your descriptions are great! I like the way you describe the setting and how it makes the observer feel with extreme detail. I was able to picture everything really well in my head. Moving forwards, I think what you should do is reassess what you're writing about. Maybe I misunderstood what you meant by <em>"describing a moutain," </em>but I feel that you spent too much time talking about the overall setting and how it made the observer feel instead of the actual mountain. I liked your description of the mountain being "a beast arisen from nowhere; its tip to be unseen" and I think you should continue this as you'll prevent yourself from drifting too far from the object of interest.
Answer:
Road accidents can be curbed. There are some things that can be done to prevent road accidents. Firstly, we need to have more campaigns for the use of seat belts, propaganda is always useful to spread the message. Secondly, signs in the road need to be in perfect condition, if there are damaged signs, it could confuse people and provoke accidents. Then, it is important to have more government’s controls on the road; not only speed limit control, it is also necessary to have alcohol control. And lastly, in relation to the alcohol control is important to make campaigns to give the message about 'zero alcohol' and explain that is not okay to drive after you drink.
Explanation:
To complete this exercise, you have to <u>write ways to curb road accidents.</u> I wrote four different actions to take related to prevention of accidents caused by alcohol, the lack of seat belt use, the lack of government’s control on the road, and also the lack of maintenance on the road.
Well, a character archetype is kinda the person would usually see. Like in a school story you have bully- who intimidates others
In an action story you have a hero or the villain
or the damsel in distress
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In a Cell One, a sense of lawlessness begins to take hold as many of the younger Nigerians join subversive cults as a sign of the breakdown of authority. In this short story, Adichie focuses on the wayward, rebellious son and his experiences with the corrupt political system.
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okay if its not D then its obviously now C.
Explanation:
Sorry i got it wrong the first time. But its C. Very sorry.