Question

Practice creating a dramatic scene. Create three to five sentences that paint an image in the reader’s mind. In each sentence include at least one of the following: simile, metaphor, alliteration, personification, onomatopoeia, hyperbole, and connotation. Label each sentence with the device you used. (Note: You will not necessarily use all of these devices.)

Answer 1

Answer:

“Whoosh!” went the wind. A girl with bright green eyes sighed so loudly that the ground shook. She was as annoyed as her parents were when she did something disobedient.

Explanation:

Don’t use this answer exactly. That would be cheating, this is merely an example. The first sentence contains an onomatopoeia, the second sentence contains hyperbole, and the third sentence contains a simile.

Answer 2

Answer:

as it states above " “Whoosh!” went the wind. A girl with bright green eyes sighed so loudly that the ground shook. She was as annoyed as her parents were when she did something disobedient. "